Revision 2
Fix LLM writing patterns: 4 trailing -ing clauses, 30 em dashes (above threshold) (model: claude-opus-4-6)
Revision 3
CRITICAL fact-check + link fix: (1) Remove fabricated $158M Ganieva settlement; (2) Rename Criminal Activity heading; (3) Fix broken Lesley Groff link [supersedes proposal #90]